brni (brni) wrote,
brni
brni

revisions

i just revised the ending of the last section of zoo-music-girl, because i finally started to understand what that character was trying to tell me before he died.

http://www.livejournal.com/users/brni/79329.html

the revised part starts at "And I stood back under the force of your words."
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